Wednesday, 9 May 2012

Waiting For The Rain.........



 





                                               

I have seen the colors of your eyes
clear and bright as blue skies
Let no shadows ever cast
And let there be no rain ....

sometimes when trying to kill d pain
A  haze grows on them
and the whole world becomes grey
But
 let there be no rain ...


Even if the world  turns into a yellow terrain
 I will walk the desert  (in vain)
and may i die of thirst and pain
looking in your eyes
waiting for the rain
But Let there be no rain......


Seeing the hint of a rain
I crave for resurrection
but
let me drink it from far
Even
 all of me turns brown
let me die this time
For still, i can wander in your deep blue eyes
But I can't see a rain....
 let there be no rain .....


10 comments:

  1. Great expression of grief !the "And let there be no rain ...." itself is catchy and explains it all! Wonderful start to a blog i looking forward to from ages. Kudos! :)

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  2. Amazing...precise and vulnerable to truth. Born out of a creative mind...

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  3. loved it in all bits of it.. Summing up simply amazing u r.. Respect :)

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  4. Thanks Rajiv and Neha for passing by and for such gratifying comments :)

    Hope to see you here regularly !

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  5. Read through it. Superb expression, the piece justifies your caliber. :) Look forward to more of such gems from you. :)

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  6. Thanx Abhijeet and hope to live up to expectations :)

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  7. Flawless,Meaningful and superbly written!!
    I must appreciate ur writing skill's pandey ji!! ;)

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    1. Thanx for the read and your kind words :)

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  8. wow.....nice buddy...keep it up......!!

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